Following the creation of my preliminary task I asked my class mates what they thought of my product. The feedback I received was largely negative. Here are some examples of comments that were made:
-There is too much blank space
-The contents page seems to be lacking structure
-The same fonts are used too much
-The lack of supporting stories gives the impression of a magazine with little to offer its audience
However, as well as these constructive comments, I also received some positive feedback. Here are some examples
-The use of red in the masthead is very effective
-The effect created by the photograph in the bottom right of the contents page works well
-The house style is carried throughout
This feedback certainly gives me something to think about for when i progress onto my main task. I now know area’s in which i need to improve, such as the use of fonts, and area’s which work well, such as the use of red in the masthead.
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