I have listened to the feedback I recieved and acted accordingly. I have changed supporting images to supporting stories in an attempt to emphasise the lead image. I have also included a border at the top of the page so to increase the professional image of the piece.
I have also acted upon criticism in my contents page, I've been sure to include the previously overlooked subscription section of the page and tried to help create clear boundaries between each part of the page. I will probably increase the image size in the final product in an attempt to draw the readers attention.
My double page spread has experienced a complete rework. The story is now no longer in one unappealing text heavy block. I have also moved the supporting image to a position where I can recreate the picture seen in that section of the page in my preliminary tasks content page. I have added a new feature called "What you think" which I hope will seriously challenge the conventions of print.
After completing these designs I took them back to my target market. They were much happier with the quality of the designs and were eager to see the final product!
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